2007年3月5日 星期一

生命之歌讀後感

Song of the life is a very beautiful poem.This first poem is very touching.This first poem biggest characteristic is may use English to sing.This first poem also is the world well-known ballad.This first poem gives the person the very profound life enlightenment.This first poem causes me to profit very much.

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Happy 提到...

Hi,

Just you said, "Song of the life is a very beautiful poem.This first poem is very touching."

What's meaning in the follwoing? "This" is overusing and redundant. Do you explain how you get through your life and how you act your life?